Surfing Love Poem by Rini Shibu

Surfing Love

Rating: 5.0


Like waves of the ocean
you reached out to me
And flowed back
leaving me alone
on the endless shores
But  the rumbling surf
Is still talking to me
stretching arm wide open
calling me softly
to step into the wet sand
and pulling me towards water
Into the deep ocean of love
To soak me completely
Where I can lay my head
On his wide open chest
and  relax peacefully

Thursday, February 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 23 February 2018

Terrific visual imagery here, Rini. You've captured the timeless allure of the ocean to communicate another wavelength of love. An excellent piece of writing.

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Rini Shibu 23 February 2018

Thanks Seamus for your wonderful comment..! !

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Lamar Cole 23 February 2018

This is a very beautiful poem filled with great imagery.

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Rini Shibu 23 February 2018

Thanks Lamar for your lovely comment..! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 February 2018

Romantic expression. Beautiful poem on love. Thank u dear Rini for sharing this.

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Rini Shibu 23 February 2018

Thanks Kumar for reading and writing a comment

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Practicing Poetess 22 February 2018

So beautiful, Rini! Great work, this!

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Rini Shibu 23 February 2018

Thanks dear protests..! ! ! !

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Nudershada Cabanes 22 February 2018

A delightful poem Rini. Enjoyed it.

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Rini Shibu 23 February 2018

Thanks a lot Nuder..

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