Sweet Dawn Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Sweet Dawn

Rating: 5.0


Dear dawn, oh dear dawn you hear
I am standing beneath love life
You have risen pink rosy light
I have dipped myself in this love.

Very sweet you are with nice scene
Again and again I watch you daily
Early ornaments you wear is sky
Vast horizon is your necklace.

Very beautiful queen you are dear
Time is your king of course we know
Your veil of green scene speaks up
You are little bit shy to talk with.

Sweetness is expressed very well
Poetic mind blossoms like rose
Many poets adore you from early rise
By grace of God you are beautiful.

Saturday, December 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mannah Shekh 06 December 2015

So wonderful poem..

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Rajnish Manga 06 December 2015

Congrats for your poem No.400. In this poem you have portrayed the scene of a wonderful dawn rather elegantly. The dawn is not only an aesthetic feast for eyes and senses but also a spiritual experience for all people including poets. Thanks. Some beautiful lines: Early ornaments you wear is sky Vast horizon is your necklace.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2020

You have personalized DAWN as human and that makes the poem sheer brilliant. Dawn is a part of nature. Nature is created by God and the cycle is round. We love dawn since it is God's creation. All in God becomes complete. I am mesmerized by this oh so loveliest Ode to Dawn to God. Well captured, dear Master Poet Kumarmani Mahakul Sir. A dashuing poem for a beautiful morning. A 10 Full Score and much much more

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2020

Sweetness is expressed very well Poetic mind blossoms like rose Many poets adore you from early rise By grace of God you are beautiful............................Sure, by the grace of God, we are all complete, nature is beautiful, dawn or evening, beautiful. Touchingly worded. I have enjoyed very much this extraordinary poem.10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 January 2019

Who's not moved by dawn? In this poem you're dear poet heart and soul with her. Dawn is in her infancy and you have approached her with a natural innocence of a child. Amazing.

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Valsa George 06 December 2015

This is a lovely poem as beautiful as the dawn you celebrate in your poem. Each morning is a new birth full of beauty and wonder! How many poets have been intoxicated by the beauty of morning and they give vent to the flurry of excitement and joy on watching the early dawn through their poems! A 10

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M Asim Nehal 06 December 2015

As usual nature appears amazingly in so many colours which is hardly to predict or anticipate, only after reading your oem one can start thinking on those lines. Thanks for sharing and Congrats for another milestone..400 10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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