Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 183,751 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Sweet Dawn - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Dear dawn, oh dear dawn you hear
I am standing beneath love life
You have risen pink rosy light
I have dipped myself in this love.

Very sweet you are with nice scene
Again and again I watch you daily
Early ornaments you wear is sky
Vast horizon is your necklace.

Very beautiful queen you are dear
Time is your king of course we know
Your veil of green scene speaks up
You are little bit shy to talk with.

Sweetness is expressed very well
Poetic mind blossoms like rose
Many poets adore you from early rise
By grace of God you are beautiful.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, morning


Comments about Sweet Dawn by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Valsa George (12/6/2015 11:57:00 PM)


    This is a lovely poem as beautiful as the dawn you celebrate in your poem. Each morning is a new birth full of beauty and wonder! How many poets have been intoxicated by the beauty of morning and they give vent to the flurry of excitement and joy on watching the early dawn through their poems! A 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (12/6/2015 3:10:00 AM)


    As usual nature appears amazingly in so many colours which is hardly to predict or anticipate, only after reading your oem one can start thinking on those lines. Thanks for sharing and Congrats for another milestone..400 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (12/6/2015 12:52:00 AM)


    Congrats for your poem No.400. In this poem you have portrayed the scene of a wonderful dawn rather elegantly. The dawn is not only an aesthetic feast for eyes and senses but also a spiritual experience for all people including poets. Thanks. Some beautiful lines:
    Early ornaments you wear is sky
    Vast horizon is your necklace.
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  • (12/6/2015 12:02:00 AM)


    So wonderful poem.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015



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