! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***symphony Onshore***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***symphony Onshore***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


heart needs to glow by tunes of symphony
to sate pain of wounds milling through wind
swooning grief to pound rucks of sorrows
on lap of trenchant instinct of lone infinite

beneath the light of lamp post
path smearing dusts of gold intones
to wrest darkness to walk you across
by downy darkness of winging shadow.

joy croons in its space divine to uplift
as goldmrh whispers in autumn onshore
by the soothing breeze of breath eternal
yet to cuddle the green of infinite bliss

mirth mellows dappled florence immortal
flutes by jingling tones of capsules oblong
onto the mortal kiss of gloss en shinning
lest soul may absolve by swing of heaven...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 04 June 2010

beneath the light of lamp post path smearing dusts of gold intones to wrest darkness to walk you across by downy darkness of winging shadow Your mood and style of expression is classical no doubt. Words sometimes carry the meaning of its ambiguous significance. Overall plain-speech raising its spine to an universality. Actually the craft touching me much. Intelligence lastly overpowers the emotions. 'To wrest darkness to walk you across........ Regards, 10+ Apoet B

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Emma Adamyan 02 June 2010

what a tittle, what a poem under it. as if u took readers somewhere between an ocean and the sky... unlimited space one can find in this poem. good work!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 01 June 2010

'joy croons in its space divine' ......... wonderful!

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this is wonderful.. indeed it is a symphony

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Crystal Bradley 24 May 2010

You are a very sophisticated and gifted writer. You make me feel quite naive and lacking.

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Catherine Yen 01 July 2010

Sorry for responding late, due to some translation works for Taiwanese poets. Your poetry is very sophisticate, mature and compelling, delivers a wonderful hue in expressing the inwards. Hope to have a chance to translate it into Taiwanese and share with our poets.

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Iren Stergiou 27 June 2010

It's really awesome! ! ! These words raised fever to my mind. Thank you for sharing.

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A rich poem. Embraced with high poetic imagery! Beautiful; D

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Sreekala Sukumaran 08 June 2010

wonderful poem well penned... liked it so much. Thanks for sharing...

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Vijay Menon 05 June 2010

a very nice poem to read adorned with fine words, good attempt

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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