! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***symphony Onshore***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***symphony Onshore***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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heart needs to glow by tunes of symphony
to sate pain of wounds milling through wind
swooning grief to pound rucks of sorrows
on lap of trenchant instinct of lone infinite

beneath the light of lamp post
path smearing dusts of gold intones
to wrest darkness to walk you across
by downy darkness of winging shadow.

joy croons in its space divine to uplift
as goldmrh whispers in autumn onshore
by the soothing breeze of breath eternal
yet to cuddle the green of infinite bliss

mirth mellows dappled florence immortal
flutes by jingling tones of capsules oblong
onto the mortal kiss of gloss en shinning
lest soul may absolve by swing of heaven...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sreekala Sukumaran 23 May 2010

Tile is perfect for the poem, beautiful wordings, well written... liked it.. Thanks for sharing with me...10++

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Sreekala Sukumaran 23 May 2010

Title is perfect for the poem beautiful wordings, well written.... liked it... Thanks for sharing with me...10++

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Arunesh Goswami 23 May 2010

wow..what a beautiful poem! ur writing is very mature. Sublime Indeed. Thanks! ~!

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 23 May 2010

It is a deep poetry, needs a mind of bottomless pit to appreciate its subtlety. One may be enchanted by its lines while others may trapped in a wandering mind.

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 May 2010

soothing breeze of breath eternal yet to cuddle the green of infinite bliss liked these expressions very much. infinite bliss eternal breath. touch of the divine in you. thank you for sharing.

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Catherine Yen 01 July 2010

Sorry for responding late, due to some translation works for Taiwanese poets. Your poetry is very sophisticate, mature and compelling, delivers a wonderful hue in expressing the inwards. Hope to have a chance to translate it into Taiwanese and share with our poets.

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Iren Stergiou 27 June 2010

It's really awesome! ! ! These words raised fever to my mind. Thank you for sharing.

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A rich poem. Embraced with high poetic imagery! Beautiful; D

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Sreekala Sukumaran 08 June 2010

wonderful poem well penned... liked it so much. Thanks for sharing...

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Vijay Menon 05 June 2010

a very nice poem to read adorned with fine words, good attempt

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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