Synagogue Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
Synagogue
Her heart was a synagogue
Sacred and celestial
Where She enshrined my love,
Adored me as her King.
Her incessant rain of love,
Solaced the crucified pain
Of my heart's crucible.
She painted variegated dreams
On my murky heart's canvas
In iridiscent colours.
The words she wrote as holly
In the pages of my life
Became the torch to my paths
And now she is the Goddess of my temple.
This poem caught my attention and i cannot stop reading it. It's soo good!
Sacred and celestial, heart's synagogue enshrined my love. Adored me as her King, ' No problem dear you can compare you love with any eternal and ethereal real thing in the world including god. As it is up-to poet to decide and put his feelings. However, sorry to contradict the opinion of another fellow poetess. But the truth is I appreciate the way the poem flowed naturally. Once again a hearty congratulation from my heart to you as you produced yet another miraculous love poem. Keeping going.......Cheerio for now!
Sacred and celestial, heart's synagogue enshrined my love. Adored me as her King, ' No problem dear you compare you love with any eternal and ethereal real thing in the world including god. As it is up-to poet to decide and put his feelings. However, sorry to contradict the opinion of another fellow poetess. But the truth is I appreciate the way the poem flowed naturally. Once again a hearty congratulation from my heart to you as you produced yet another miraculous love poem. Keeping going.......Cheerio for now!
Amazing :) but referring verse as 'adored me as her God'... woooo it's hard to accept this write..i know it sounds so sweet but yeah no person should be compared to God.. Sorry if that did offending you, because i'm the strict on that, maybe millions here not agree with me but that's my opinion...and othe than that i wow...beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! lovely write_Unwritten Soul
The synagogue is the right place where the decision to crucify the love can be taken! sad!
Great write Vipins, I liked this one! My favorite line is: Adored me as her King, Solaced, the crucified pain.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/7/2025 6:46:46 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful poem, truly phenomenal!