Take Me Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Take Me

Rating: 2.8


I look
into the
shimmering
majestic
night sky
'oh sky,
take my soul away,
I don't need them anymore'
the reluctant sky says
'there's no room anymore,
my soul
is pouring too,
to the extent
of flooding
the souls
underneath'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 28 October 2009

'I look into the shimmering majestic night sky' Rachel Ann Butler

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Madison Yeater 01 January 2009

i like this poem..it makes you realize some things... i feel this way too sometimes... nice =)

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Naidz Ladia 14 December 2008

i dont need them anymore....ths is a line of one who almost lost hope...maybe ME? the context is very nice, , , inspiring new contributors to continue..i love ths poem of u..

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Tree R 24 November 2008

great.............................. :)

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