Tanka 17 (Problems Imaginary) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Tanka 17 (Problems Imaginary)

Rating: 4.5


Lots of smoke, nothing
solid to catch in hands
this is how our life's
Imaginary problems
Creep in unsuspecting mind.

Sunday, July 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,problems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

So beautifully penned on life and problem. A brilliant thanka shared amazingly.10

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Savita Tyagi 01 August 2018

Lovely Tanka Mehta Bangalore. Thanks for posting as a comment.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 August 2018

Nice penned //// Tiredness sleeps deeply Dream carries new bioscope nightmare enjoys jail Yet life lives lively in breath I can imagine with hope (TANKA)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2018

A wonderful poem in the form of Tanka....very insightful! Thanks dear madam for sharing! (10)

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