Tanka 18 (Moon) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Tanka 18 (Moon)

Rating: 5.0


Half moon past two am.
unusual is its hue
Summer air is warm
eyes not used to such colors
soul feasts on glorious view.

8.4.2018

Saturday, August 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Last night I came to our front lawn. Moon had such unusual pale glow and silvery-red hue inspiring me to write this Tanka. I never saw such glow. Some time waking up at night is a blessing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 06 August 2018

Midnight moon is always a bliss...you have brought out very well its essence and how you feel watching it in this cute beautiful Tanka format.....like it a lot Savita (! 0)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 August 2018

An elegant piece of poetry dear madam! Thanks for sharing....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2018

Soul feasts on glorious view with the wonderful perception of half moon in summer sky. An Amazing poem is interestingly and excellently penned with nice imagery. Moon whether half or full this attracts attention of poets always...10

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