we remain inside blanket
flowers bloom at night
fragrance allover in air
moonflower, red flare calls out
Winter is coming...wonderful tanka
The poem creates the right notes for the winter sonata- pleasant, cozy, warm and rhythmic. With a masterstroke, you have created a fascinating scene that reflects the changing season. Thank you, Asim ji.
Welcome winter 2020.Hope you will wipe off Covod 19
5-7-5-7-7 Syllables and a wonderful poem. A thoughtful tanka for change of season.
Appropriate poem for changing seasons. Welcome winter and bye bye spring.
Winter is truly very majestic. Many flowers bloom at each day of winter. We feel WINTER'S BREEZE IN LORD'S NAME. Lord's name is truth.
Winter is nice one
Pouring chillness all over
Pulling on sweater
That is warmer.....nice Tanka Sir.
This winter Tanka is majestic like other winter poems. Winter season is very amazing. Moon flowers bloom during this season. An interesting poem is well penned..5 stars..
Tanka in winter is awesome
Coats and sweaters are out. We go inside blankets. Nature blooms anf fragrance all around. Nice way to welcome winter.
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