Tanka - Winter Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Tanka - Winter

Rating: 5.0


majestic winter
we remain inside blanket
flowers bloom at night
fragrance allover in air
moonflower, red flare calls out

Thursday, October 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 29 October 2020

Winter is coming...wonderful tanka

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Rajnish Manga 29 October 2020

The poem creates the right notes for the winter sonata- pleasant, cozy, warm and rhythmic. With a masterstroke, you have created a fascinating scene that reflects the changing season. Thank you, Asim ji.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 29 October 2020

Welcome winter 2020.Hope you will wipe off Covod 19

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Zoyza Da Vinka 29 October 2020

5-7-5-7-7 Syllables and a wonderful poem. A thoughtful tanka for change of season.

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T Rajan Evol 29 October 2020

Appropriate poem for changing seasons. Welcome winter and bye bye spring.

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Budhashaya Behera 31 October 2020

Winter is truly very majestic. Many flowers bloom at each day of winter. We feel WINTER'S BREEZE IN LORD'S NAME. Lord's name is truth.

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Varsha M 30 October 2020

Winter is nice one Pouring chillness all over Pulling on sweater That is warmer.....nice Tanka Sir.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2020

This winter Tanka is majestic like other winter poems. Winter season is very amazing. Moon flowers bloom during this season. An interesting poem is well penned..5 stars..

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Gordon Walter 29 October 2020

Tanka in winter is awesome

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Ricky Manhatten 29 October 2020

Coats and sweaters are out. We go inside blankets. Nature blooms anf fragrance all around. Nice way to welcome winter.

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