Tantrum Queens Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Tantrum Queens



There are those who are writers.
And others who choose to be tantrum queens.
They are the ones demanding to be rated.
Demanding their submissions be assessed.
With a listing of their writings,
Read and reviewed.
If not those requested to do this,
Are discussed in forums and demeaned.

It's so obvious it is disgusting.
And it is those who are younger that do it.
With words drawn from concepts that are incorrect.
They have high expectations...
For something submitted less than their best.
Hoping for a rating as if competing in a contest.
Wishing that thoughts half expressed,
Makes a bridge to eliminate any guess work!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 30 May 2009

wow..my dear sir! true...it must be upsetting at times... the rest is OK but for If not those requested to do this, Are discussed in forums and demeaned. thats crass an coarse they desrve the condemnation...some princes here too beat your eye.. cheers

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