Bare foot suckled in sand
Rain water wiped out the clouds
Lightning subjugated every eye
And dreams flew like a fountain.
A tantalizing Queen
In her tapestry robe
Drowned in the raindrops
Appeared in front of me.
Along with the wind
And my heart became
Tepid and tangible
To receive her in my arms.
Many we sued and conveyed
And yet to find more
While tarrying in this tavern
For a simple tangible contact.
Cuckoos sing the songs again
which thy composed earlier
Touched not my heart
And beat with thirst and sigh.
i saw you in your wet tapestry
Gummed in your body
Revealing the narrow line
Extended to the downs and drowns.
It was like tantalizing on earth
The birth of Venus
Dropped from heaven
To satisfy your healthy needs.
Magical Poet....delicate and sensual....I think that is how love presents itself to you....Great write....
This is beautiful... You have planted a vision in my mind. Its also sensual like Poetheart says!
Sensual indeed, enriched with vivid imagery and diction.Wish you a happy journey on the road of poetry!
Stunning imagery that soaks the readers mind in lines that seduce with a lush sensation! Congratulations on your 100th poem, a beautiful and sensual write!
Majestic rainy romance, very poetic and great to read. Swell job! Nice to read u again.
Woo! This is a beautiful poem.. .. I agree with everyone here. Congratulations on your 100th poem...
Congratulations on your winning the first century! The rain drenched beauty seems to have conqured your mind... the wet dress seductively clinging to her body is beautifully described!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Congratulations on your 100th poem. Beautiful poem with wonderful flow of words. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward for your next 100 poems flowing from your pen. God Bless!