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Journey

Rating: 4.9

Life is a journey
In a small boat
Through the ocean
To fetch a green shore

Wild waves and
Strong wind
Moved him ahead
Fastly indeed.

Rowed his boat
Without fear
And he saw his friends
waiting for him

But a small crack
In the middle of the boat
Appeared suddenly
In the darkness of life.

A small hole
As small as a pin hole
Changed the direction
Of the journey entirely

Life is a journey
In a small boat
Through the ocean
To fetch a green shore

I pray for him
To fetch the shore
To the green shore
with the mercy of God.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 06 August 2013

life is a journey...well said and what a piece...brilliant sir

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Ramesh Rai 01 August 2013

beautiful write. plz do read my poem I HAVE TO CROSS THE GREAT OCEAN regards

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Heather Wilkins 31 July 2013

a green shore is hard to fetch

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Heather Wilkins 30 July 2013

a beautiful story about our journey I give it 10 enjoyed the journey with you good imagery

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Geetha Jayakumar 29 July 2013

Beautiful poem.. Life is a journey, slight ups and downs can change the entire journey...Good write.

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Rebecca Navarre 08 April 2021

Wow powerfully and beautifully expressed! .. Deeply moving and poetic! .. Definitely 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Ging Taping 14 April 2015

life is a journey. we can choose which way to go..where we want to go.. on our way to the finishing line...we encountered different trials but it makes us strong to win the battle in this game called life..

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Hazel Durham 11 August 2013

Change is all part of our life, we have to learn to deal with it and make change work for us! Beautiful write!

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 August 2013

Yes, very true. Life is a journey and a slight drift will changed the entire journey unexpectedly. Lovely poem and i loved reading it too.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 08 August 2013

It is so true, life is a journey in a small boat on the ocean. We have to answer for everything we do even think. Well written.

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