Captain Herbert Poetry

Tattoo (Haiku) - Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Shade and carve with INK
Roses of PROSE; Odds of ODE

Form: haiku

Comments about Tattoo (Haiku) by Captain Herbert Poetry

  • Cynthia Buhain-baello (5/28/2015 9:46:00 PM)

    Interesting Haiku in 5/7/6 syllable arrangement about poetry. I found Haiku is defined as a Japanese poem of 5/7/5 syllable format on topics about nature, mostly using adjectives and a caesaura (pause) in the middle before the last line. This one is a unique form and an innovation from traditional Haiku. It's a cross between a Senryu (Haiku about human foibles) and a Haiku. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/6/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    Expressions are infinite and boundless
    Great poem
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  • (5/5/2014 5:03:00 AM)

    you've tattooed the poem into the brain well done indeed...regards and thanks (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2014 4:20:00 AM)

    Poems are like tattoos that carve in the innermost heart (Report) Reply

  • (5/1/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. Short but meaningful (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2014 1:06:00 PM)

    Poems will last long until death like tattoo. Beautiful poem (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2014 12:48:00 PM)

    Highly meaningful and lifting the Poetry world. Great poem and Great poet (Report) Reply

  • (4/28/2014 11:39:00 PM)

    Yes they are! Poems and tattoos! Love them both! Great haiku! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 28, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 29, 2014

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