Open Hands Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry
Open Hands
It starts with a heart of love
With the soul flowing of sincerity
A simplicity of self but imparting own behalf
With purity of intentions ready to give
Sharing gifts, reliefs, donations, pledges and any amounts
But the unseen shares are the time, efforts, and prayers
The good care, assisting the unable, and soothing the pain of people;
- Sharing can be our encouraging words
Sharing has begun with the Creator
The Son shares His life to us
Everyone has the Seeds of Helping
With an OPEN HANDS
Blessings of heaven will Shower back upon us
Pride and Greed hinder the Sharing
Bitterness blocks the benevolence
And Love of Money closes our Affectionate Palm
But our deepest heart will remain gentle
Laying our means to touch lives
Delight with dedication to give and help
With an Open Heart
Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE.
Excellent form and content, superb flow and fantastic word choice, very profound images. It's a joy to read poems like this. Brilliant!
If only we can help a brother in need, open up and heal a sister in affliction then the world will be a better place for all
Wonderful poem! With an Open Heart Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE Love these two lines Great job!
But our deepest heart will remain gentle Laying our means to touch lives Delight with dedication to give and help With an Open Heart Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE. the idea of sharing is well pictured and and given to the readers. a very nice poem. tony
Excellent job! It's Very inspiring to me. Take my heartiest regards. May Allah bless you. Be happy always.651
Open Hands, a great write, on Sharing, which starts with our God, Who shares His love with open hands and we are the benefactors of this Love Sharing also means kindness in giving our time, sympathy, money, encouraging words to people who are in distress.Loved this poem.Thank you for sharing.
Very inspiring and heartwarming poem about caring and giving, a relevant poem in these our times. Superb theme.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/12/2024 12:51:06 PM # 1.0.0
what a lovely poetry....! ! No words for this title.....! ! !