Open Hands Poem by Captain Herbert Poetry

Open Hands

Rating: 4.6


It starts with a heart of love
With the soul flowing of sincerity
A simplicity of self but imparting own behalf
With purity of intentions ready to give
Sharing gifts, reliefs, donations, pledges and any amounts
But the unseen shares are the time, efforts, and prayers
The good care, assisting the unable, and soothing the pain of people;
- Sharing can be our encouraging words

Sharing has begun with the Creator
The Son shares His life to us
Everyone has the Seeds of Helping
With an OPEN HANDS

Blessings of heaven will Shower back upon us
Pride and Greed hinder the Sharing
Bitterness blocks the benevolence
And Love of Money closes our Affectionate Palm

But our deepest heart will remain gentle
Laying our means to touch lives
Delight with dedication to give and help
With an Open Heart
Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 24 April 2014

what a lovely poetry....! ! No words for this title.....! ! !

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 24 April 2014

Excellent form and content, superb flow and fantastic word choice, very profound images. It's a joy to read poems like this. Brilliant!

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Matthias Pantaleon 24 April 2014

If only we can help a brother in need, open up and heal a sister in affliction then the world will be a better place for all

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Jessica Hernandezdamian 25 April 2014

Wonderful poem! With an Open Heart Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE Love these two lines Great job!

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Vilma Gomez 04 May 2014

Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE..Really beautiful

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2017

But our deepest heart will remain gentle Laying our means to touch lives Delight with dedication to give and help With an Open Heart Sharing will make the wOrld full of LOVE. the idea of sharing is well pictured and and given to the readers. a very nice poem. tony

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Shahin Latif 02 December 2015

Excellent job! It's Very inspiring to me. Take my heartiest regards. May Allah bless you. Be happy always.651

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Bharati Nayak 08 August 2015

Open Hands, a great write, on Sharing, which starts with our God, Who shares His love with open hands and we are the benefactors of this Love Sharing also means kindness in giving our time, sympathy, money, encouraging words to people who are in distress.Loved this poem.Thank you for sharing.

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Luo Zhihai 02 June 2015

Great piece. Keep it up! 伟大的作品。坚持下去!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 May 2015

Very inspiring and heartwarming poem about caring and giving, a relevant poem in these our times. Superb theme.

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