Tea Plucking Girl Poem by Abhinav Baruah

Nice piece. Painted well.

Dear Poet Picturesque in its conception yet an ambiguity that nags one.Thats what makes it great.Thank you for inviting me to read your poems dear poet.

Dear poet, this is wonderful poem i like the mood, the timing, the words and the spirit of your romantic deep feelings big ten from me 10+++++++++

I liked the lines: Tea gardens and serene scene. And: 'Dear poet, Wish you were notkissin on my blood and sweat.' I really enjoyed reading this poem. It reminds me one of those Japanese Geisha Gardens while they're drinking tea and feed the fishies. So peaceful. It makes you dream. I'm gonna add this poem on MyFavoritePoemList. Keep penning. B.B.

thank you for sharing, its a good description of Tea plantation and the toils.

I shudder with the thought of kissing a tea plucking girl at my age. She would certainly give a country boy like me chicken skin..10 to you Ab.

well expressed feelings of love...Thanks for sharing

is this about helplessness or pleasure? or simply about life in its ironic and sarcastic form which whether happy or sad ends in an undefined balance.

I believe we should bring back rhyming in poetry. Good attempt at that. Well conceived poem. Good.

It is the irony of fate that one should labour for the pleasure of another one. But one should learn to respect the labourer.