Tempered Poem by Rob Lamberton

Tempered

Rating: 5.0

Plant me forever
Beside oceans of flowers
O' garden shovel
Rake me not away from her
Wave of sun shine on my blade

Thursday, February 22, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers,oceans
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 23 February 2024

Innocent plea, nicely written I liked it....Straight to my Favourite poems.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 February 2024

Plant me there forever beside oceans of flowers...lovely expression!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 August 2026

A tender and very endearing poem that captures love and togetherness. Beautiful imagery. It cleverly blends gardening work with a succinct, unique love story. A favorite.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 February 2024

A wonderful and thought provoking title. Top Marks!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 February 2024

Sometimes less insignificant things will magnify beauty or increase its strength. Brilliantly crafted poem with sterling images.

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Anjandev Roy 23 February 2024

Justly marvelous.......

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 23 February 2024

Wonderful Thank U Rob

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