We've got to make a mence
and stop our false pretense
that we are suffering so much
we're just only out of touch
but not yet out of reach
for we are not alone
time is a precious stone
not unlike an abalone
so lay down your mobile phone
and start to talk in common sense
for all of us there will be a second chance!
I agree that too much time is wasted talking on mobile phones. I like to think that we will all be forgiven and get a second chance. The first line: Do you mean 'make amends? '
Nice one. Flows well to conclusion. That there is hope with some good old no holds barred straight talk
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So true on the writing of your poem. If only more would give their technologies a break and get with each other and nature.