A day without u is like a day without its sunshine
If I had a flower for every time I think about u
Then my life will turn to be a forever garden
when I see flowers grow, and the sky is blue
Then I feel that ur return is soon and u 're fine
And when I hear your voice I feel as if I with u
U may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind
I just 've look in my heart cuz that’s where I find u
U may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind I just 've look in my heart cuz that’s where I find u This is so cute and simply beautiful... the lines reflect the love and true feeling of missing someone... keep writing like this
Hey :) I'm glad you PM'd me. This is a beautiful poem! It connects deeply to me, though I know you weren't writing it for me. Just had a little thing with the you's being 'u', but those can be ignored easily. :) keep it up!
A very beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing.
A well articulated love poem penned from the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Well, I'm not crazy about the spelling mistakes, but other than that it's not bad.
Wow the heart is like a camera it will keep those special memories alive...thanks for such wonderful poems...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i adore you abdallah, really! ! !