That's Why I Miss You Poem by Abdallah Gamal

That's Why I Miss You

Rating: 4.8


A day without u is like a day without its sunshine
If I had a flower for every time I think about u
Then my life will turn to be a forever garden
when I see flowers grow, and the sky is blue
Then I feel that ur return is soon and u 're fine
And when I hear your voice I feel as if I with u
U may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind
I just 've look in my heart cuz that’s where I find u

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
isatou Juwara 07 August 2011

i adore you abdallah, really! ! !

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Shamin Shah 04 August 2011

U may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind I just 've look in my heart cuz that’s where I find u This is so cute and simply beautiful... the lines reflect the love and true feeling of missing someone... keep writing like this

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Ingibo Benson 28 July 2011

Simple, emotional and sublime. Keep writing Abdallah.

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R.J. Santos 27 July 2011

Hey :) I'm glad you PM'd me. This is a beautiful poem! It connects deeply to me, though I know you weren't writing it for me. Just had a little thing with the you's being 'u', but those can be ignored easily. :) keep it up!

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Katelin Offord Harper 25 July 2011

another breath taking poem

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Cigeng Zhang 30 December 2016

A very beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing.

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Chinedu Dike 03 January 2015

A well articulated love poem penned from the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Cierrah Smiles 03 September 2012

I know what you mean that's all i will say....

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Amy Marie 06 November 2011

Well, I'm not crazy about the spelling mistakes, but other than that it's not bad.

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Debra Martin 16 August 2011

Wow the heart is like a camera it will keep those special memories alive...thanks for such wonderful poems...

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