louis rams

Gold Star - 12,509 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

The Angry Young Man - Poem by louis rams

He had so much anger, so much hate
To lash out at someone he couldn’t wait
An innocent bystander walking down the street
This was the one that he would beat.

If she had suspected what lied ahead
She would have turned her back and fled.
With fists flaring he knocked her to the ground
Her jaw broken - she couldn’t make a sound
They say they don’t know how she survived
With the extent of her injuries
they was sure she would die.

She gave a description of what he looked like
And before blacking out she started to fight
They caught him with the description she gave
They saw that he was full of anger and rage.

They say from his step father he had been abused
And fighting back was of no use.
His mother did not believe what he had said
And she turned - and sent him to bed.

He now blamed his mother for what
His step father had done
no one to turn to, no where to run.
She should have - defended her son.

He and his step father are both in jail
Because his mother had truly failed
To hold a man she did not watch her son
Now look at what he has gone and done.

(child abuse can create stories such as this)


Comments about The Angry Young Man by louis rams

  • Vipins PuthooranVipins Puthooran (10/8/2011 1:08:00 PM)

    Everyone must be aware about the underneath fact of one's rage..and Child-abuseis on the rise to an unknown peak in nowadays...well written.. (Report)Reply

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  • Hans VrHans Vr (10/8/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    Yes, Louis, the angry young man.
    Very nicely put in perspective.
    Sometimes we see only the rage.
    Once we see the background, we can understand.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 7, 2011


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