The Bait On The Hook Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

The Bait On The Hook

Rating: 5.0

In waters deep, temptation lies,
The bait on the hook, a fish's demise.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Fishing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M. Asim Nehal 31 July 2023

This is how we catch the fish. Profound two liner. Wisely thought 5*****

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Bri Edwards 11 August 2023

I tend to agree, Asim. ;)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2023

I feel a lot of pain on the sad demise of the little fish

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Bri Edwards 11 August 2023

You'll get over it. : )

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 July 2023

LOL Brilliantly funny rhyme

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Bri Edwards 11 August 2023

I tend to disagree, LeeAnn. : (

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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