Yasmin Khan

Exclusive News

Sunday morning, I switch
on to the news app
to listen to the exclusive
news over a cup of coffee.
Ah! words distressing,
hurtful, wound the senses.
Smoke and ashes
Swirl in the airs,
Flowers and birds
Crushed, killed all,
Gardens is hurt and it bleeds,
Little birds with wings burnt,
Cry and shrill in the searing winds.
Backpacks, notebooks smolder.
Little angels now will never reach
their school as death's taken
its toll on the poor once again.

Topic(s) of this poem: painful

Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 2, 2013
Poem Edited: Thursday, May 2, 2019

Poet's Notes about The Poem

At least 15 children were killed in a school van gas cylinder blast that took place in Gujrat (Pakistan)

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  • Liza SudinaLiza Sudina (3/13/2017 12:39:00 AM)

    Yes, we live like in Hell.

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  • Khalida Bano Ali (12/25/2014 9:30:00 AM)

    a heart touching poem.................10

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  • Jayatissa K. LiyanageJayatissa K. Liyanage (7/14/2014 2:43:00 AM)

    Tears rolls down your cheeks, cos you are a human, a human with a difference. How many others read the same news that you read? Do they also shed tears like you? I doubt. Many of us shed tears like you, cos, as you say how many innocents like flowers, birds, swans, angels and so on are being crushed in to dust by the so called liberators in the name of freedom, justice and what not? Worse than they, are the ones who instigate conflicts, encourage systems to continue conflicts and spread conflicts, not for nothing, but for their own selfish gains. Let us all rise against them. Great thinking, YK.

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  • Hira AkhtarHira Akhtar (4/24/2014 2:55:00 AM)

    whenever such things happen in our country, it causes a panic in the city and citizens and also we can't do except letting our tears hit the floor or help those people: (
    We can just pray for them...
    Regards
    hira

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  • Akhtar Jawad (4/1/2014 2:10:00 AM)

    An impressive poem indeed.

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  • Muhammad Ali (1/1/2014 11:34:00 AM)

    may we have courage to speak the truth. and may we have courage to admit what we are. and where we stand. we all.

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  • Brian JohnstonBrian Johnston (12/31/2013 6:45:00 PM)

    I swear I have so many questions for God! This is the first poem of yours that I have read and I now look forward to reading them all. I look forward to return visit from you as well. To me it's almost impossible to understand such tragedies. The only way I can avoid anger is to remind myself we (you and I) are incapable of understanding God's perspective on this kind of issue. Right now the only good i can see is your poem... Many people may be touched. But surely something more is required to balance the scale!

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  • Geetha JayakumarGeetha Jayakumar (8/21/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Jasmine.. Its too painful when we see such tragic news..but each day one or the happens and we hear it...we can just pray, may their soul rest in peace.
    Wonderful poem and each lines are well written.

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  • Aftab Alam KhursheedAftab Alam Khursheed (6/22/2013 7:56:00 PM)

    O death where is thy sting....JK I always think and shrink within my thought and fall sick.You have brought out the fact with knitting nicely that must touch the heart and mind Nature's game, now here at Uttarakhand (I am staying here as posted) Thousands of dead body all round you must be going through the NEWS well writ poem

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  • Yasmin KhanYasmin Khan (6/6/2013 12:11:00 PM)

    Wa Alakum Asslam(peace to you) , thanks for nice comments.

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  • Julie SchleppegrellJulie Schleppegrell (6/6/2013 7:58:00 AM)

    Assalam Alaikum Jasmeen. sad but wonderful story in this one [3

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  • Valsa GeorgeValsa George (6/6/2013 6:52:00 AM)

    When innocents are snatched away untimely, it leaves a deep scar! Often tears roll down my eyes when I go through the newspaper, reporting such incidents of mass casualty of school children! A moving write! !

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  • Shahzia BatoolShahzia Batool (6/5/2013 4:52:00 AM)

    Senses wounded
    Smoke and ashes
    Swirl in the city
    Flowers and birds
    Crushed and killed

    tragedy is captured and tears are shared! ! !

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  • Farah IlyasFarah Ilyas (6/5/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    On their way to seek light
    Those little angels descend to eternity.....journey of light turn into darkness, so sad
    I take a sigh-only a sigh
    And a tear rolls down my cheek...what should we do except it? ...touching poem indeed...(

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (6/4/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Sometimes nothing we can do just tears can roll down from eyes...down to our cheek and fall into deep ground..may it reach the one who live inside there with prayers..nicely done Jasmeen, keep it up_Soul

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  • Somanathan IyerSomanathan Iyer (6/2/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    mostly we remain helpless with a deep sigh and tear drops. powerfully projected feelings. please read my poems 'Terrorism' and 'Quest for blood' to share the feelings.

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  • Vishal SharmaVishal Sharma (6/2/2013 4:04:00 AM)

    so sad
    may they rest in peace
    nice tribute to them

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