Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 337 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

The Big Surprise - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Defying Time and Space,
I traveled all the way
To the end of the colorful
And peaceful Rainbow.

While in transit
Through my long journey,
Hoping to find
That dreamed and
Hidden treasure
To be discovered,
A thousand thoughts
Came across my mind
And in one of them,
Your name was embedded!

Big was my surprise
When reaching my destination,
It was not a treasure chest
Filled with shining gold
I found
But a lovely and smiling Angel
Happily waiting for me!

For my great surprise,
That angel resembles you!

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Comments about The Big Surprise by Romeo Della Valle

  • (8/10/2012 9:59:00 PM)

    Your surreal poem describes a vertical spiritual travel.The rainbow becomes the symbol of the divine way, because you want to reach Heaven, where you may meet the Angels.I think that your poem develops a fundamental theme about life and death and its message is to surpass the pain of the matter's death for the life of the spirit. To see the unseen -this is the great message coming from a great poet-thank you, dear Romeo (Report) Reply

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  • Captain Cur (8/10/2012 1:19:00 PM)

    I love this poem with a surprise yet impeccably enchanting ending.
    Still smilling as I am writing this. This beats rolling in the dirt as a wolf.
    Love ya Romeo.
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  • Valerie Dohren (8/8/2012 2:01:00 PM)

    That special person is worth more than a pot of gold - good one Romeo. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012

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