The Bird Came Back In The Cage Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Bird Came Back In The Cage

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My eyes say, "I don't see him."
My ears say, "I don't listen to him."
My tongue says, "I don't know his taste."
My nostrils say, "I couldn't feel his smell."
My whole says, "I never touched him."
My heart said, "How can you?
When I fell during my infancy he picked me up.
I was touched,
and this touch was so much pleasing
that I have kept him in my safest chamber.
I shall not let him go to you,
I know you will pollute this touch.
During my youth when I started loving beauty
He appeared in different costumes
but the face was always veiled.
I tried to paint him
and the brush I dipped in all the colors
one by one
but it painted only white on the white canvas.
Though I never listened to his melodies
but the waves of sound titillated my whole.
I'm sure there was a sound.
Sometimes like a naughty child
through the windows I forgot to lock
he jumped out and hid himself in the flowers.
When I plucked the flowers
he flied in the skies and hid himself in the clouds.
With tears when I said good bye to him
he came back as the rains,
I saw him flowing in the rivers and I chased him
but he vanished in the seas.
Since then I was sitting at the shore of the sea,
listening to only break, break and break.
Now during at this old age
I decided to break my relationship with him
and go back home.
To my surprise the touch was in the cage.
I don't know what the touch is!
But now I shall write Him for him.

Tuesday, December 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 20 December 2017

Now during at this old age I decided to break my relationship with him and go back home. To my surprise the touch was in the cage. I don't know what the touch is! But now I shall write Him for him.....touching lines with honest words...superb Akhtar

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Valsa George 19 December 2017

When we think that He has wandered away from us and that we shall never see Him, it is then He makes His appearance! Beautifully summarized a man's quest after God!

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2017

white on white intrigues me. IN: I shall not let him go to you, I know you will pollute this touch. AND: I decided to break my relationship with him...........i wonder who/what you and him refer to. favorite lines: With tears when I said good bye to him he came back as the rains, I saw him flowing in the rivers and I chased him but he vanished in the seas. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 14 December 2017

i like some of the images, but if i had not seen god as a topic, i probably would not know the poem concerned 'god'. i'm still not following the story, even with the 'god' clue. i assume Him in the last line refers to God, but what about the him? flied, though it would seem correct to many non-native speakers of English, should instead be flew.

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