The Bests Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Bests

Rating: 5.0


Best is my planet in the solar system,
Best are the phases of its only moon,
Best are the stars that twinkle in the nights,
Best is the sun so much bright in the noon,

Best are its oceans that give rise to the vagabonds,
Best are the winds that force them to dance,
Best is the wine that naughty clouds carry,
Best are the forests their adventure and romance

Best are its fields that grow rice and wheat,
Best are its gardens that bloom ecstatic odors,
Best are its birds the musicians of nature,
Best are its butterflies the shocking flying colors,

Best is its pink dawn and its pink dusk,
Best are its moonlit nights and its bright sunny days,
Best are all its daughters and sons, who are in love,
Best is the instinct of the game that everyone plays,

Best is the game let it continue till the dooms day,
Best is the peace for my planet the dancer of space,
Best is the ethics that teaches coexistence of all,
Best are kisses and hugs that paint a smiling face.

The Bests
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Miltz 01 March 2020

very good read..... I like it.....!

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 March 2020

best best all are of this earth since birth until death east to west, north to south lovingly.......

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2022

My favourite line is: 'Best is the ethics that teaches coexistence of all ' Top score for this beautiful poem.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 March 2020

I concur with the beautiful comments of Unwritten Soul. A great and loving man will always see the best in everything. A great poem wonderfully written.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 March 2020

THIS CERTAINLY IS ONE OF YOUR UNIQUE BEST POEMS BUT THEY FOUND ANOTER EARTHLY MOON DID YOU NOT KNOW JA SIR GOOGLE Best are the phases of its onlyXXXXXX moon,

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Unwritten Soul 04 March 2020

You found the best things in everything and that the best in you! A lovely soul that stay with lovely thoughts in mind!

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Kesav Easwaran 03 March 2020

A poem that upholds the best outlook in life. Speaks beautifully on the essence of co existence. The earth is our common home. A nice poem well crated well rhyming 10+

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