nakul awal behl

Rookie (25-09-1990)

'The Black Swan' - Poem by nakul awal behl

Simple living and innocent being is
what i was seeing,
peaceful swan was my wan,
one bad day all it takes
for the journey from white to black.
The surrounding evil at its excruciating will.

Dark was overtaking the white king,
when thorns of black wings bring,
red tears wear the new me,
few days all it take for the transition.

Devil's double was exhibiting.
extracting the color from dark lor,
stronger it became.

Killing every extract of the white swan,
spread its wings,
ready to be the king of everything,
poisoning the fellow being
viciating, creating and retaliating later...


Comments about 'The Black Swan' by nakul awal behl

  • Jinal Oswal (12/22/2011 3:13:00 AM)


    A real good imagination.... darkness conquers when we let go all our hopes.. but I wish you never let go one :) (Report) Reply

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  • (12/17/2011 9:40:00 AM)


    Life has all shades..we are born pure as white and undergo changes, sometimes as dark as black..remarkably expressed! (Report) Reply

  • (12/16/2011 1:54:00 PM)


    thank you! sajna :)
    where are you from btw?
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  • Sajna Kailas (12/16/2011 1:37:00 PM)


    different thought! love the theme and narration! ! good work! keep it up! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2011 12:20:00 PM)


    thank you dave! yes sure (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2011 4:21:00 PM)


    Like it, enjoyed reading it. A great poem.
    May i invite you to read my new poem called,
    Return Of The Crow.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 6, 2011



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