The Brighter Side Of Things Poem by Aniruddha Pathak
The Brighter Side Of Things
A storm raged and picked up tearing pace
Knocking down sun-shed on my terrace,
Blessing bright Sun as boon,
At night a silver Moon,
Ah blizzards do wear a benign face!
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Reflections | 03.07.13 |
A wonderful limerick imbued with the wonders of Nature. The great Poet always writes his limerick with ease like this one. Beautifully and cleverly written.
A brilliant Limerick on nature has been so astutely delineated by you dear Pathak sir. I enjoyed it and voted ten from ten. Thank you a lot.
For good words of feedback and rating, thank you very much Dear KM.
Finest Limerick I ever read (how many Limerick have we on PH, I reckon) and such best rhymes. A 10 Full Score (do they still give marks for the Voting? I don´t know, I just copy the PH rules. As always I have enjoyed the words in this brilliant Limerick. Thank you for sharing. God´s Blessings be Greatest for you and your beloved family.
Such kind words can only come from a good heart, thank you dear reader.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/14/2024 10:45:24 PM # 1.0.0.1119
" benign" storm? i hope you never see a malignant one! ! R U using " poetic license" with " blizzard" for a storm in India? most Americans probably picture India as having NO snow. Here a " blizzard" is a very strong, very visibility-limiting, long-lasting SNOW storm. bri ;) i have a " good heart" as you imply that Sylvia does. but she and i don't “see eye-to-eye”.
And it seems, you have taken up upon you not to see 'eye-to-eye with me either, but that is another point. Would not a world be such a dull place to be if every one would see that way? I enjoy your comments.
Dear Bri, even the purest of milk may carry some bacteria, and not all of them are bad either. Further, in 'on my terrace', my does not necessarily mean Aniruddha's who happens to be in India. Words are only means to an end. Yes, there is no doubt you do have a good heart, where is the question?