The Brothers Poem by Luwi Habte

The Brothers

Rating: 5.0


The mother gives a birth
After a while pain decrease
She had two boys in number
But some thing hidden is there

Boy 1
He is so kind
With the smart mind
Respectful man
And lovely one,
Hilarious
Precious
Admired by a lot
Every thing what he got

Boy 2
He is a fool
Not even a cool
But unfair
Harmful pain
Wrestled with any guy
Wade in his own way
Understate people
As he is humble

Never to be comparing
No one can accept they are sibling
Yes it is obvious a mother had two sons
But they are not only a proper person
Boy 1 is one and half
Boy 2 is only a half
Considering their behave

Dedicated to two brothers...
29/10/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Sathasivam 09 November 2009

Great write. Well done Enjoyed reading it

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Henry Brown 01 November 2009

How true it is that twins are born and are opposites. Very thought provoking work Well done You have my 10! ! !

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