Watch as I have to look
Looking as I have to understand
Understanding as I have to accept
Accepting as I have to face
facing as I have to pretend
Pretending as I have to be up on ahead
Being up on ahead as I have to stay apart
Staying apart as I will never face any body
Will never facing any body as I have to live alone
Living alone as I have to deserve more
Deserving more as I have to wait
waiting as i have to watch
life is a lesson! ! !
kind of cerculation
Definitely from the heart luwi, your emotion pours from within to create this excellent share of your life's reflection...10
'Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch' Beautiful. Lovely poem. Expressed well. Thanks for sharing with me 10+
Beautiful piece. Liked a lot. Nicely penned. wonderful. deserves 10+
Nice piece, Luwi. we go through pains, but it gets us purified.
Dear Habte, I like the way the poem surges like a wave and recedes but doesnot end there, and comes back again. Joshua
Through these lines I can see the poetic personality of a young lady growing! Keep writing! -Raj
Watch as I have to look Looking as I have to understand Understanding as I have to accept Accepting as I have to face facing as I have to pretend Pretending as I have to be up on ahead Being up on ahead as I have to stay apart Staying apart as I will never face any body Will never facing any body as I have to live alone Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch I believe that this short poem is the best poem of all poetry because here you being mature teacher, presented things in two inter related variables and proud that every thing come with the help or the effect of other thing.. great job you did here..inspiring work..really well done dear poetry firend for that much sweet poetry and meaningful thoughts..appreciate you much 10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch no dear you have to fact asmd alone.. it is philosophy of life..one has to look forwar andmarchnot to waitand every opportunity is to be grabbed...come what may. have faith in himmand all be alllright, , , fine art piece of writng.....10 read mine you get lost..... yes to to... you go alone..