* * Pain Poem by Luwi Habte

* * Pain

Rating: 3.2


Watch as I have to look
Looking as I have to understand
Understanding as I have to accept
Accepting as I have to face
facing as I have to pretend
Pretending as I have to be up on ahead
Being up on ahead as I have to stay apart
Staying apart as I will never face any body
Will never facing any body as I have to live alone
Living alone as I have to deserve more
Deserving more as I have to wait
waiting as i have to watch


life is a lesson! ! !
kind of cerculation

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2009

Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch no dear you have to fact asmd alone.. it is philosophy of life..one has to look forwar andmarchnot to waitand every opportunity is to be grabbed...come what may. have faith in himmand all be alllright, , , fine art piece of writng.....10 read mine you get lost..... yes to to... you go alone..

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~ Jon London ~ 14 September 2009

Definitely from the heart luwi, your emotion pours from within to create this excellent share of your life's reflection...10

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Ravi Sathasivam 14 September 2009

'Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch' Beautiful. Lovely poem. Expressed well. Thanks for sharing with me 10+

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Anju Addanki 15 September 2009

Luwi life is a lesson that is very true. a very nice one.

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Mubeen Sadhika 15 September 2009

Beautiful piece. Liked a lot. Nicely penned. wonderful. deserves 10+

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Michael Nkwocha 14 September 2016

a beautiful piece, Luwi. keep it up.

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Michael Nkwocha 14 September 2016

Nice piece, Luwi. we go through pains, but it gets us purified.

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Aube Joshua 04 June 2010

Dear Habte, I like the way the poem surges like a wave and recedes but doesnot end there, and comes back again. Joshua

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Raj Nandy 15 November 2009

Through these lines I can see the poetic personality of a young lady growing! Keep writing! -Raj

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Afzal Shauq 25 September 2009

Watch as I have to look Looking as I have to understand Understanding as I have to accept Accepting as I have to face facing as I have to pretend Pretending as I have to be up on ahead Being up on ahead as I have to stay apart Staying apart as I will never face any body Will never facing any body as I have to live alone Living alone as I have to deserve more Deserving more as I have to wait waiting as i have to watch I believe that this short poem is the best poem of all poetry because here you being mature teacher, presented things in two inter related variables and proud that every thing come with the help or the effect of other thing.. great job you did here..inspiring work..really well done dear poetry firend for that much sweet poetry and meaningful thoughts..appreciate you much 10/10

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