I Love You Poem by Luwi Habte

I Love You

Rating: 4.7

It seems that will never pass
The precious life we have
It seems that will never fade
The memories kept in mind

The king of my heart
You are hilarious, I bet!
Damn precious man
As you was my lovely fun

I would be in a good shape
If I were there inside
In the home we have at all
With the peace that I am waiting for

Don’t go away you know what you mean to me
My salvation also my beloved body
Stay blessed for the one who loves you
For the one for me, your daughter too

Love poem for father of mine,

Sandra Martyres 07 October 2009

Deep affection for your father well expressed in this piece..

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Ion Untaru 07 October 2009

a very good poem, I rate with 10. I suggest to ad 'to my father' immediatly after title, and not to explain at the end: I wrote this poem for my father's love. best greetings.

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Heath Gunn 09 October 2009

a truly lovely poem Luwi from an all too unused perspective Heath

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Prakash Mehra 09 October 2009

Wonderful work Luwi. God bless you.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 10 October 2009

Great compassion. Ten dr.sakti Please visit my page and comment

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2019

King of heart is happiness and this is guarded by love. The expression of feelings is done nicely in this excellent poem. There is always deep affection tween father and daughter. You are definitely a blessed daughter. This poem is a nice tribute to your father.10

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Nishi Kumari 03 January 2015

nice poem....describes the beautiful relationship of a father and a daughter....

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Tshering Tobgay 20 April 2010

Aunt, uncle, grandpa, grandma, etc... cannot substitute your own parents, that is what i feel of your poem. good piece! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 March 2010

ILY the most euphonic utterance and ably poetically presented.. Enjoyed… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 10 November 2009

simple poem with deep expressions... lovely

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