The Call Beyond Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Call Beyond

Rating: 5.0


In that hour before-
The dawn of my life,

Wings of my desire to die-
Aspired to be with you again.
Ship of my exile from

Your endless vale of silence-
On another timeless voyage,
Undertook a newer oath,
Reckless to smell your fragrance,

Catering the hunger of my soul
Awaiting to be fed with thy memories,
Limitless thirst for you to quench,
Lust for a life was aroused.

Thursday, April 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 12 May 2016

Catering the hunger of my soul Awaiting to be fed with thy memories, Limitless thirst for you to quench, Lust for a life was aroused. Nice Call beyond the earthly desires. Reflects the platonic love in you for her. 10 for it. Thanks for sharing it. Seema

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Seema Sharma Rimi 12 May 2016

In that hour before- The dawn of my life, Wings of my desire to die- Aspired to be with you again. It was a call from her that fed you with ample aspirations. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Suratha Kumar Rout 07 September 2019

Great poem. Thanks for sharing. 10++++

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Rajendra Rout 21 September 2017

Your endless vale of silence- On another timeless voyage, Undertook a newer oath, Reckless to smell your fragrance.this line was touch my hart.what a beautiful poem.sir i am realy very happy.thanks for shairing...10+++

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Terry Craddock 19 June 2016

'The dawn of my life, Wings of my desire to die-' powerful with the ship of my exile wonderful

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Anita Aparajita Das 19 May 2016

Your endless vale of silence- On another timeless voyage, Undertook a newer oath, Reckless to smell your fragrance, Catering the hunger of my soul Awaiting to be fed with thy memories, Limitless thirst for you to quench, Lust for a life was aroused. Classic touch of platonic love. Thanks Subhas for the poem. Nitu.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Love! With the wings of my desire. Nice work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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