# The Chef- Haiku Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# The Chef- Haiku

Rating: 4.9


the 'green' in the leaf
nourish the plant as a chef
the sun would provide

[thanks to carl harris]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 01 June 2009

full credit goes to Carl Harris...thanks

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Fiona Davidson 01 June 2009

Excellent write...great tutor....Fi 10+++

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Three simple lines used to explain the lengthy photosynthesis. Well done.

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Tsira Goge 01 June 2009

samanyan, It is beautiful..10... Tsira

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Ramesh T A 01 June 2009

Message in the micro poem shines like Sun in a macro way!

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Shashendra Amalshan 09 June 2009

yes sir! ! ! ! ...you are a great cheff indeed..who give food for our thoughts.....nice write..10++ regards shan

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Indira Babbellapati 07 June 2009

a great n nourishin chef as well thought!

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Ken E Hall 06 June 2009

Yes the almighty will provide the sun we provide the chemicals thoughtful regards

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 June 2009

Wow! What an idea. Truly poetic.

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Carl Harris 04 June 2009

This poem is still a senryu, samanyan, as any reference to man eliminates it from being a haiku poem. Your rephrasing of the original version is not quite what I suggested, but this new version makes the same point with the exception of the human term 'chef.' Carl.

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