~the Connection Poem by Dislocated Heart
~the Connection
burnin inside,
its a new sensation.
the kiss you release,
its a new connection.
where i will find you,
its a new location.
the thing i love bout you,
its your determination.
the way you move,
to the way you talk.
the way you walk,
to the way you say,
i love you.
its all new,
and each time it happens,
damn.. i still feel that connection.
Hello. Very good poem. A suggestion: Remove 'when' from 'way you say I love you.' You don't need it and there's no special scan to it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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oh wow..cool poem..even though i dont really know who u talkin about...anyways..good job..u have a good writting skill..i can visualize this in my head as u say it in this poem..well..anyways..uh..wow..good..poem