Dislocated Heart

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4 All The Women/Girls Out There! - Poem by Dislocated Heart

a women.
delicate.
strong.
beautiful.
< br>she can tease.
she can smile.
she can do such harm that makes us men kneel down and bow.
lol
of course all girls wants to be the princess in their mans heart.
always wanting the attention they can never get.
but only a girl with honor, integrity, and patient's
will be the most beautiful girl of all.

im saying not all women arent beautiful.
they all are.
just different ways of showing.

a womens humor.
a womens passion.
their every move
is unique
also extraordinary.

every women got a way to cast a spell on a guy.
something bout each women keeps a guy going back.
and wanting more.
and if your a women reading this. no! not that.
i mean for you.
wanting you.
for your personality.
the way you smile.
the way you cry.
the way you laugh and dance.

this is for all the women out there who thinks they are not good enough, or thinks they are ugly. your not ugly! ! !
i know that everyone has an ugly side. but look deep in yourself and you will find,
a beautiful soul ready to blossom...


Comments about 4 All The Women/Girls Out There! by Dislocated Heart

  • (3/8/2010 6:55:00 AM)

    so beautiful......and so heartwarming (Report)Reply

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  • Bethany M. (7/12/2008 10:35:00 PM)

    beautiful, i think that every woman/girl who reads this will be touched in a way that you may not ever know. as I was. Very nice poem! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/24/2008 10:00:00 PM)

    The poem is great - just there are some tiny spelling mistakes that discount its perfectness. (Report)Reply

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  • (6/10/2008 6:19:00 PM)

    thank you. this proves that not all guys are jerks. lol. very good. thank you very much. (Report)Reply

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  • (5/16/2008 3:26:00 PM)

    WOW.... That's a great poem! Although i have to admit, it does make me wonder... lol. Please keep writing, I love your poems. =) (Report)Reply

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  • (5/11/2008 9:20:00 PM)

    wow... this poem got me thinking... good work! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/5/2008 1:56:00 AM)

    I love the way you write its unique. Liked reading this poem even though I am not a woman and the fact that it talks about beauty of a woman is something which makes it a special poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/1/2008 11:26:00 PM)

    enjoyed it...there is truth in it (Report)Reply

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  • (3/28/2008 12:46:00 PM)

    Thats a good poem..Its the truth a lot of girls are like that..and I'm sometimes like that..Keep writing! ! Love your poems! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/19/2008 7:05:00 PM)

    hahah
    love it

    keep writting....very very interesting
    : ]
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  • (3/19/2008 7:30:00 AM)

    wow... i never actually thought someone would write this about us girls... two thumbs up! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/17/2008 9:37:00 PM)

    This poem is amazing! Most guys go their entire live without noitcing these things. Thank you for recognizing that all women are beautiful in their own special way (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/1/2008 12:12:00 AM)

    yeahhhh.......man, you got it right! Women are fragile and like a piece of cake.You got to eat it or life is amiss. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/9/2008 3:06:00 PM)

    you express you'reself very beautiful about women or the ladies but yet you're not happy with what she's done to you.. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/7/2008 1:33:00 PM)

    Another ten and a virtual hug (((hug))) - shannon (Report)Reply

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  • (12/20/2007 3:04:00 PM)

    this poem has just made my day: D thanks Justin. this should lift everyones sadness when they read this, its wonderful (Report)Reply

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  • (12/11/2007 12:11:00 AM)

    Hell yeah.

    I'm damn beautiful. At least tonight I am.
    Gr8 write. Keep up the good work.

    Love,
    ~Marlayna Anne@}; -
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 29, 2011


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