4 All The Women/Girls Out There! Poem by Dislocated Heart

4 All The Women/Girls Out There!

Rating: 3.1


a women.
delicate.
strong.
beautiful.

she can tease.
she can smile.
she can do such harm that makes us men kneel down and bow.
lol
of course all girls wants to be the princess in their mans heart.
always wanting the attention they can never get.
but only a girl with honor, integrity, and patient's
will be the most beautiful girl of all.

im saying not all women arent beautiful.
they all are.
just different ways of showing.

a womens humor.
a womens passion.
their every move
is unique
also extraordinary.

every women got a way to cast a spell on a guy.
something bout each women keeps a guy going back.
and wanting more.
and if your a women reading this. no! not that.
i mean for you.
wanting you.
for your personality.
the way you smile.
the way you cry.
the way you laugh and dance.

this is for all the women out there who thinks they are not good enough, or thinks they are ugly. your not ugly! ! !
i know that everyone has an ugly side. but look deep in yourself and you will find,
a beautiful soul ready to blossom...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bootiful Kid 11 May 2008

wow... this poem got me thinking... good work!

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rohit sapra 05 April 2008

I love the way you write its unique. Liked reading this poem even though I am not a woman and the fact that it talks about beauty of a woman is something which makes it a special poem.

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Prasanna Kumari 01 April 2008

enjoyed it...there is truth in it

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Wendy Collison 28 March 2008

Thats a good poem..Its the truth a lot of girls are like that..and I'm sometimes like that..Keep writing! ! Love your poems! !

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hahah love it ♥ keep writting....very very interesting : ]

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Justina Haner 08 March 2010

so beautiful......and so heartwarming

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Bethany M. 12 July 2008

beautiful, i think that every woman/girl who reads this will be touched in a way that you may not ever know. as I was. Very nice poem!

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R R 24 June 2008

The poem is great - just there are some tiny spelling mistakes that discount its perfectness.

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Serenity Prayer 10 June 2008

thank you. this proves that not all guys are jerks. lol. very good. thank you very much.

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Allysyn Bryant 16 May 2008

WOW.... That's a great poem! Although i have to admit, it does make me wonder... lol. Please keep writing, I love your poems. =)

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