The Conversation Poem by Min Sia

The Conversation

Rating: 5.0


One stormy night..
Darkness surrounds so might..
Suddenly, a great thunder..
I asked,
'My only God, how long this storm will last? '
-'A second.'

A second! A second! ..It took my life..my everything...
A second? !

I asked,
'Dearest God, do we have the same seconds..the same time? '
-'No.'
'Then how long it is then? '
-'A million years.'

A million years. A million years.
My Precious God of mercy.
This storm has drowned me..my family..my neighbors..
You have the power..the will..
Why my Lord..Why?

I asked
'God, you have few words. How long will you stay tonight? '
-'My child..I will stay..for years to come..I just had smiled on you.

(Oh! My Lord God..I was really blessed..For all these trials I have, I know it's for my better..I know you'll not give me that I could not overcome..)

Dear Readers, God smiles in different ways...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sathyanarayana M V S 06 December 2008

Mia you are right. During trying circumstances only we pray; when God stays nearer to us.......Yes God is always merciful; only we have to realize.

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Ency Bearis 06 December 2008

a great inspiring monologue..well done...10 Ency Bearis

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Serkan Sürer 05 December 2008

choice of words're good as well: Dthanx

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Sabrina Jubahar 05 December 2008

This is a great piece. Keeps me believing that no matter what, God will always watch us. Thanks.

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Melvin Banggollay 05 December 2008

What a nice conversation. Keep writing and thanks for sharing. love lots, melvin

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Tom Balch 14 December 2008

A really beautiful piece, regards Tom 10+

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 11 December 2008

It is so wonderful to read a poem of conversation between Min and God, for people won't believe, but It is true that we can talk with God. Great instance!

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Richard Post 10 December 2008

I suddenly realized how beautiful your poem is, and it must be written from real tragedy, may your sunshine after the storm be bright

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 December 2008

Oh! superb conversations princess! Vrey pure reflection! And the way you penned is excellent! 10+1000000

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A wonderful poem. U get 10++........

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