Naila Rais

The Dark Lonely Forest Night...

The dark stormy nights, with crusades to fight,
With deadly sight, sadness reaching its height...

The tree shivers and the shadows shakes,
The lonely soul, silence it breaks...

The chirping of the birds, reminding your sings,
All gone, the memories rings...

The tears roll down my eyes, as the rain hails,
The heart that broke going through your bales...

As far as I go, the woods get dark,
Entering the dark, as the grief bark....

Trying to find the way wich you went,
Standing at the hill, where the two roads bent...

The lightning all around, with the thunder sound,
Can YOU go all alone, by breaking that bound?

That wood, that sight is a haunting way,
You will be coming, the heart still say...

I want to enter, the woods that grew dark,
Standing at the entry, so you can find the mark...

Months passed by, as I grew old,
But memories of you, still the same...

Topic(s) of this poem: forest, love hurts

Poem Submitted: Monday, May 21, 2018
Poem Edited: Saturday, January 12, 2019

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Miss you dear my sis(best friend)
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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (10/24/2018 10:53:00 AM)

    As far as I go, the woods get dark,
    Entering the dark, as the grief bark....
    Trying to find the way which you went,
    Standing at the hill, where the two roads bent...

    \beautiful two in one two poets conveyed the same thoughts
    the woods are dark and deep I have a long way to go ere I sleep and Roberts frosts Road not taken wonderful NR

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(10/24/2018 11:12:00 AM)

    Thanks sir for your valuable words!
    Naila

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  • Theodoros MantasTheodoros Mantas (9/6/2018 3:07:00 PM)

    Excellent writting! ! !

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(9/7/2018 4:07:00 AM)

    Thanx sir.....
    Naila

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  • Warren R Abbott JrWarren R Abbott Jr (9/2/2018 3:31:00 AM)

    Gorgeous! Your words dance as if they are music
    The tree shivers the shadows shake. I LOVE IT, Warren
    So nice you did not put and in there, very poetic in timely pause

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  • Baquee Billah AhmedBaquee Billah Ahmed (8/29/2018 7:42:00 PM)

    I felt that burning fire in your dark night,
    I felt the loneliness in your dark night,

    Its a nature rule Light after darkness,
    To get somthing better it is most important to los th bad one,
    my teacher told me, if U lost a way, dont stop U may hav thousands way open, , ,

    Its a good poem

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(8/29/2018 8:04:00 PM)

    Thanx for reading.... Oh no.... It wasn't bad.... Yes, one problem has thousand solutions ...
    Naila

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (5/30/2018 1:16:00 PM)

    Heartbreak! ! !

    Love hurts!

    Tears roll down my eyes!

    Sad note; but, hope lies ahead of you.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  • Makayla (5/24/2018 5:13:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem..... Correctly describes the pain when the dear departs.

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