Naila Rais

Success

There are many things that are kept unsaid
There are sorrows that are dead
Many more new thoughts that comes in mind
Of lunatic phase of whatever kind.

Heavenly shadows hovering over my mind
Tis memories which are bind
Deadly sparks shinning so bright
Soul calling are you all right?

There are ups and downs in life
There are times to play the fife
All you need to sit and smile
Success is waiting for you at a mile! !

Topic(s) of this poem: empowerment, success

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2020

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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (9/16/2020 12:42:00 PM)

    Another well written poem Naila!

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (9/16/2020 12:28:00 PM)

    Yes success is not far for those who try and strive hard.5*
    There are ups and downs in life
    There are times to play the fife
    All you need to sit and smile
    Success is waiting for you at a mile! !

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  • Aarzoo Mehek (9/16/2020 12:26:00 PM)

    Very positive poem. Need to face the ups and down of life with a smile.

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  • Varsha MVarsha M (9/16/2020 11:22:00 AM)

    Beautifully penned.
    There are ups and downs in life
    There are times to play the fife
    All you need to sit and smile
    Success is waiting for you at a mile! ! . Good synopsis.

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (9/16/2020 11:04:00 AM)

    new thoughts that comes in mind
    thnx thoughts do come to mind after along tyme

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