The Dentist Poem by Nosheen Irfan

The Dentist

Rating: 5.0


A catalogue of flaws
Wanting to be amended
Like the initial draft
Of a novice in poetry
Pouring out with a smile
Sweet as the recital of a poem
He revealed to me
How imperfect I was!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2023

A catalogue of flaws! How can you find there a flawless entity? Yes, it needs to be amended now, tomorrow or never! !

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Anjandev Roy 02 August 2023

Lovely piece.....thanks for sharing....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 January 2023

Briliant write Nosheen Top 5 kudos

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"Sweet as recital of a poem".. Sweet poem. Good. Enjoyed. Top score.

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Nosheen Irfan

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Lahore, Pakistan
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