A catalogue of flaws
Wanting to be amended
Like the initial draft
Of a novice in poetry
Pouring out with a smile
Sweet as the recital of a poem
He revealed to me
How imperfect I was!
"Sweet as recital of a poem".. Sweet poem. Good. Enjoyed. Top score.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A catalogue of flaws! How can you find there a flawless entity? Yes, it needs to be amended now, tomorrow or never! !