The Dilemma Driving Me Poem by Illustrious Inker

The Dilemma Driving Me

Rating: 5.0


I have two cars.
One is two years old.
Other is five years old,
which costs like gold.

My second car is enormous.
It is gigantic,
as large as titanic
It has crowded my garage.

One fine evening,
I was deciding to drink coffee or tea.
Somebody suggested me
'Owning two cars isn't budget-friendly'

My heart swooned,
'A big car has big benefits.
You can relax and sit.
It's like a fixed deposit'

But my brain thought realistically,
'A big car has big troubles.
Maintaining it is a hassle.
Petrol prices are growing double.'

That fine evening
I got so confused.
I didn't know what to do.
So I decided to drink coffee- brew.

The Dilemma Driving Me
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm not as think as you confused I am :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 18 August 2021

A fantastic poem! Beautifully written....5 stars

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Indira Renganathan 18 August 2021

Your writing style is much captivating....this poem too...many ***********

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Sylvia Frances Chan 10 August 2021

Gorgeous write, brilliantly presented, I have much enjoyed your amazing poem, added with great amusing graphic! 5 Stars fullest for this poem! BUT at your age I did not drink coffee yet, only tea.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 07 August 2021

You write so beautifully, dear poetess.

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 July 2021

That is a nice poem dear, Punya. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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