The Dreams Poem by allan macli borges

The Dreams

Rating: 5.0


Never the dreams become true
As we await for miracles from above
Where nothing's living to give us hope
Never the dreams become true
As we keep the eyes closed indoor
As we keep our knees on the floor

So much weighty is this bale to carrying alone
Are we going to see that we're already at home?
The seeds we've sowed by the way of time
They shall bring back all we left behind

Never the dreams become true
As we keep looking for smoke
As we take the blame of elders
As we pay for the crimes of others
Never the dreams become true
As we hide what really matters

It's not enough for us the crises and disasters
It's not enough to help us to see the right path
There's so much more around than light and darkness
There's so much more to do than showing we regret

Never the dreams become true
- Just never
As we keep putting the guilt on ghosts
As we keep following the way of the most
When we gather the required bold
When we set the wounds unfolded
Stretching out all our fears and hopes

Maybe the dreams become true
As we start writing a new piece
Where there's no place for ghosts and mists
Where the life is respected as it is
Then some dreams will come true
As we start wiping the tears
As we keep our head out of gloom

Thursday, June 11, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 14 June 2009

a fantastuc write of the dreams...... when sometimes they come true we are gifted........ see my 10 ++

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Kristina B; Williams 14 June 2009

so very true..do dreams really come true, and if they do..its only for a moment or too

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Stacey Stevens 13 June 2009

classic...i give you a 10

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Never the dreams becomes true As we await for miracles from above it is beautiful. simply best...10 read mine also dreams not come true

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Lady Grace 13 June 2009

this is beautiful..dreams may be impossible..but there are dreams that comes as warns.grace

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 June 2009

Maybe the dreams become true As we start writing a new piece Where there’s no place for ghosts and mists Where the life is respected as it is Then some dreams will comes true As we start wiping the tears As we keep our head out of gloom Some dreams realize some do'nt but we must keep dreaming for dreams are life. A beautiful and thought provoking poem, Allan. A dreamful 10. Best Wishes Naseer

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a beautiful poem shows the awareness of the poet about the causes of the failure the causes of any failure ended with a hopeful writing...well done..10+++ Maybe the dreams become true As we start writing a new piece Where there’s no place for ghosts and mists Where the life is respected as it is Then some dreams will comes true As we start wiping the tears As we keep our head out of gloom

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 15 June 2009

Initial images and catharsis are very powerful. But I am more impressed in realizing dreams in the form of poetry. Wow!

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Beautiful poem where you have put so much thought into your lovely images. It also flows so well and I believe in some miracles, but we do create much of own reality. Just dreaming is not being positive, but writing and helping others and working together, can bring with it positive energy. Great work Allan! 10 Karin Anderson

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rago rago 14 June 2009

a fantastuc write of the dreams...... when sometimes they come true we are gifted........ see my 10 ++

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