The Dutch Weather Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan
The Dutch Weather
My loves and life
are like the Dutch weather
despite forecasted bright clouds,
brings tough stormy weathers
and yet this love has kept us tied together
I know my love like an X-Ray
but I am not the doctor, what could I say?
perhaps I forgot one biggest factor
that tiny spot behind the bladder
and yet this event has kept our love together
One day the hospital called me
they told me, your spouse has cancer
oh, that tiny spot behind the bladder?
I haven´t heard that in your last answer
despite this, it has made us stronger.
Walking the next steps on my own
made life, love and my being at their lowest
the X-Ray changed like the Dutch weather
the doctors exaggerated that tiny spot behind the bladder
despite this, my love stays and grows strongest.
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AD.Tuesday 7th November 2017
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Created on:
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Now published on Poem Hunter.com:
AD.Tuesday 7th November 2017
@ 14.38 hrs.P.M.- W.E.Time
Created on:
MONDAY 8 May 2017-
@16.33 hrs.P: M: West European Time.
(cont.) i would delete despite this, and start the last line: My love stays... to MyPoemList. i hope you are BOTH well now. bri ;)
Thank you for your worthy advices, but I'd prefer to keep the original lines. Once again, thank YOU, Bri. Yes, we are BOTH well, excellent, but still in the Dutch Weather sphere, LOL, now the most beautiful and cozy Indian Summer sphere....
i liked hearing your words describing your relationship and the episode with cancer. stanza 2 starts with a most intriguing/clever line. and it continues with, for me, a little mystery, which you soon cleared up for me. last stanza: the first two lines are some of my favorites: Walking the next steps on my own made life, love and my being at their lowest (cont.)
Thank you so much, Bri to show me your opinion toward this poem. It's oft very interesting to read and know what readers do or may think, you made that special because you comprehended that so well and you have shown to me your favourites. Thank you so much for the time you spent.
Where there is deep love in a spouse no hindrances can wash it out, may it be the Dutch weather that brings tough storm suddenly or a spouse has cancer. Despite love increases more. Dear Chan, you have inscribed this poem so touchingly and astutely. Let it be quoted.... My loves and life are like the Dutch weather despite forecasted bright clouds, brings tough stormy weathers and yet this love has kept us tied together ******************************************* Walking the next steps on my own made life, love and my being at their lowest the X-Ray changed like the Dutch weather the doctors exaggerated that tiny spot behind the bladder despite this, my love stays and grows strongest. Brilliant poem. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much, dear Mahakul Sir, for your truly honest compliments and worthy comments. I am very happy to know that you have read this poem as it should be. Readers oft have their own interpretations, but it makes me very happy to know that yours and mine are on the same level.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I would like to add with these: May your life be as you regarded that and may God's Blessings be perpetually with you and your beloved family. Amen.
This belongs to the last part for my response to Mr. Mahakul Sir on his comments here below. Thank you for your your attention, dear Sir.