The Element of Nature Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

The Element of Nature

Rating: 5.0


The element of nature

No rain is a woman
nor the distinction of a man
it is the element of nature
so prominent

when it's summer heat
is too hot to hold
so old is the crystal coolness
inside the earth

ah, here comes the birth
of the rain from heaven on earth
so very precious
so worth that sudden birth,

oops, I was wrong
the rain is a woman,
so cool, powerfully, and strong

no rain is a woman, I made a mistake
on that grandest lake
the rain, nature's wonder element
so proudly presented and so prominent
my woman!

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Tuesday 17 August 2021
On Indonesian Independence Day

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The rain is very important and precious in our life, as long as she is flowing in the right and cared stream, she gives birth and makes the earth fertile, she is very precious to keep and to make our life fresh, healthy and strong, I was wrong when I said No Rain Is A Woman, happy readung and please your feedback, thank you so much! Created on the Indonesian Independence Day 17 August 2021
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 17 August 2021

A Happy Woman's Face.

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M.J. Lemon 17 August 2021

So well said...cool. powerful, and strong....what brings relief.....Amazing verse, Sylvia.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 August 2021

read and comment on my poem 'Praise the Rain' An Excellent poem of yours Sylvia

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 August 2021

Top stars Sylvia for this sweet poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 August 2021

I love the personification of rain as a woman, fertile and always a giver...

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 August 2021

Apologies Sylvia! I tried to write the comment but something else has appeared. Before it was deleted the page turned. Please delete it.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 August 2021

What a beauty, dearest Sylvia! The rain lady is truly gorgeous!

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Rebecca Navarre 18 August 2021

The rain, Thank God for such necessity and beauty! .. Powerfully beautiful! .. And the notes too! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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