Shake! Shake! and make all awake
From sleep and rescue for God's sake.
The ground starts to move suddenly,
Everything begins to drop uncommonly.
The father earth, is stoping or dancing
The sons and daughters, are trembling
The earth is quite energetic and gay
We are upset and have nothing to say!
The old walls keep breaking down,
Cars would crash if they don't slow down.
We may die and be free of all kinds of pain
And still we try to stay calm or look sane.
The climax of poem is the last verse, and spreads out its message. And still we try to stand and not to leave our sane I experienced earthquake and many other things like earthquake. Earthquake in my life, opinions Life style... And in every time I try not to leave my sane.how nicely you composed this struggle.
very beautiful written.show the fear you have felt.thank you so much for this beautiful poem.
It is a terrible accident...i am very sad about my compatriot ... thanks God that you and your family are alive. very beautiful poem, Sina
Wow, thanks God you are alive, we really were scared because of this event. God help all the happy and nice and kind people of west and north to defeat all the sadness and God bless the souls those have been gone. your poetry even in this condition is so nice.! really nice take care dear Mate.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Earthquakes can be both real and metaphorical. Your poem can be interpreted either way. Good one Sina.