Alice Perfect

The 'Enlightened' Club - Poem by Alice Perfect

What happens to a soul who is 'Illuminated'?
Anger, sadness, fear, pride completely abated

When such energies exit, a vacuum is created
What now enters and fills until elated?

Love, Kindness, Happiness, Compassion
A whole new style and whole new fashion

If this is what takes over the being
why not now, all this, you and me-ing

Today let's all live these qualities
No prob, no stress, if we fall, at ease

Start each day as a flower unfolding
Opening up reaching out
giving love, compassion, kindness,
the nectar of Being now Bestowing!

If an Enlightened soul
becomes Compassion, All LOVE!
There's nothing to stop us
from joining that club!

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Inspired by teachings of Robert Adams, an American Mystic
A true Jnani

Comments about The 'Enlightened' Club by Alice Perfect

  • (9/23/2015 8:15:00 AM)

    ...wonderful message, and best club to join ★ (Report) Reply

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  • Amitava Sur (9/27/2014 6:28:00 AM)

    A lovely penning what I love, love you too who can think so and wish all the people think in similar way to establish the peace all over. Thank you for sharing this.

    You may read my poem Enjoy being a complete you
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  • (7/23/2014 5:14:00 PM)

    The message is powerful but the essence is lost because of your focus on wanting it to rhyme thus forcing the rhymes. a poem does not have to rhyme, infact some of the best poems do not rhyme. This can be a very powerful and positive poem perhaps you can review it. You just need it to flow with a chosen meter. I look forward to reading more of your poems. (Report) Reply

  • (7/23/2014 7:57:00 AM)

    you and me-ing huh Biz....hmmmm must learn to reach the verbal heights of assimilation as you have! ;) lol I enjoyed your piece Monk and love the message. (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (7/7/2014 1:38:00 PM)

    Bravo Poet.....Let me in on this Club....I am sure i'll be happy.....You defined happy so well.... (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (7/7/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    A great club in which to be. Enlightenment is is a gift we should all be aiming for. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (7/7/2014 5:22:00 AM)

    I want to join that club and be a lifetime member, to give is to receive a beautiful soul, that lives with love that flies to unkown places and brings joy to many faces! ! (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (7/7/2014 1:09:00 AM)

    Wow! A cool write!
    If an Enlightened soul becomes compassion, all love
    There's nothing to stop us from joining that club
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  • Gajanan Mishra (7/7/2014 12:25:00 AM)

    Enlightened soul, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 7, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 23, 2014

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