Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 207 Points (Singapore)

*** Desire *** - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Desire intends to merge
With addiction
Crossfire, in between the feat
Body wasting…
Mind jumps into brazen pool
Honey melts, drips in crushes
Soul catching soul
Diaphragm of craving enlarges
Waves of blood, rush incessantly
Desire floods the veins
Longing invades taste
As long as the Sun is alive
I can see the hope, shining so bright
As long as the nights, painted in blue
I can see the twining possible
Dear, dearer dearest
Catch me…
Let me breathe your soiled love
Weighed in heavy drooling lust
Allow me to swim in your ocean of devotion
Drown…die smiling
Desire defeats desire
Decorative euphony


Comments about *** Desire *** by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • (7/23/2009 11:20:00 AM)

    Your choice of words and images is superb and involving. Very good. Thanks (Report)Reply

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  • (6/19/2009 7:01:00 AM)

    EVERY POEM I READ I 'M REFRESHED, BEST WISHES, KEEP UP.10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/12/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    Let me breathe your soiled love
    Weighed in heavy drooling lust... desie is mother of. all evvils.. good work and above all powerful words with excpression
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  • (4/10/2009 10:24:00 PM)

    Each time i read this poem my heart melts i love it i realy realy love it my only thought was of you posting it in a newspaper where maybe someone will notice it and convince you to make your own poetry book :) great job luv always (well ur poems lol we never realy met) keep doing what your doing. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/2/2009 6:46:00 AM)

    It's the longing for satisfaction that heightens the desire within us. Wow. This is beautifully crafted. You deserved to be among the tops. Congratulations! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/20/2009 5:33:00 AM)

    Desire on desire. What a concept. Fire on fire!

    GW62
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  • (1/16/2009 12:11:00 PM)

    nice poem i'm new at this (Report)Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (1/14/2009 6:14:00 AM)

    oooou this just gave me chills, oh yes, love it. Your imagry is so full of life, sensuality spills over every intoxicating word. I felt it, yes you definitely took me there and what a pleasurable place to be. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/7/2009 6:33:00 PM)

    This is a really good poem... it is full of feelings and very understanding.... (Report)Reply

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  • (12/29/2008 4:33:00 AM)

    A desire deep beyond the Taj Mahal of dreams.. I didn't know you had a poem in the Top500 Poems! Still, it's a very beautiful poem. Full of feelings. Love it! (Report)Reply

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  • Sarah Sisson (12/26/2008 6:48:00 AM)

    Very capturing poetry...love it! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/25/2008 10:25:00 PM)

    wow such a strong poem it really has deep 'desire' into it (Report)Reply

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  • (12/25/2008 1:39:00 AM)

    VIVIDLY IMAGINATIVE POEM DEAR POET.
    I SMPLY LOVED THE ABSTRCT USE OF YOUR WORD 'DIAPHGRAM'
    CAPTIVATING
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  • (12/21/2008 11:30:00 AM)

    Sulaiman, you know i'm not great with words, but you are amazing with them. i would have tosay that this poem is one of your best yet. it's truely amazing. the way you describe it, so elaborate yet so covered, is great. honestly, it's a masterpeice.
    Dolan
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/19/2008 8:48:00 AM)

    The extract from Phia's comment:

    From: .phia <3 (toome United Kingdom; Female; 17)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 12/18/2008 6: 09: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Re: Desire


    hello sulaiman,
    i heeded your suggestion and read your new poem, desire.
    i found it astounding, perfectly balanced, it is truly great.
    i would be overjoyed if you would take the time to read my poems.
    thanks,
    phia.
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  • (12/19/2008 6:24:00 AM)

    Well, what can I say my brother.....Your vision is something to be admired and there for desired.........amazing work bro.....it's great to be back and to be reading your fine works again.

    keep them dizzy bro....10+++

    your brother
    Jon
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  • (12/19/2008 3:18:00 AM)

    it is the good one...i just joy di club my english is poor but want to learn more abouth poetry. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/18/2008 9:36:00 PM)

    you're good bro.. You're good! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/18/2008 7:43:00 PM)

    I think this poem was great.
    Its shows how much effort you
    put in it. I enjoyed reading this poem
    and cant wait too read other poems' you've
    written.

    -Angelica Santos: D
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  • (12/18/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    It absolutly great. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 28, 2008


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