*** Desire *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
*** Desire ***
Desire intends to merge
With addiction
Crossfire, in between the feat
Body wasting…
Mind jumps into brazen pool
Honey melts, drips in crushes
Soul catching soul
Diaphragm of craving enlarges
Waves of blood, rush incessantly
Desire floods the veins
Longing invades taste
As long as the Sun is alive
I can see the hope, shining so bright
As long as the nights, painted in blue
I can see the twining possible
Dear, dearer dearest
Catch me…
Let me breathe your soiled love
Weighed in heavy drooling lust
Allow me to swim in your ocean of devotion
Drown…die smiling
Desire defeats desire
Decorative euphony
The extract from Phia's comment: From: .phia <3 (toome United Kingdom; Female; 17) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 12/18/2008 6: 09: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Desire hello sulaiman, i heeded your suggestion and read your new poem, desire. i found it astounding, perfectly balanced, it is truly great. i would be overjoyed if you would take the time to read my poems. thanks, phia.
Sulaiman, you know i'm not great with words, but you are amazing with them. i would have tosay that this poem is one of your best yet. it's truely amazing. the way you describe it, so elaborate yet so covered, is great. honestly, it's a masterpeice. Dolan
VIVIDLY IMAGINATIVE POEM DEAR POET. I SMPLY LOVED THE ABSTRCT USE OF YOUR WORD 'DIAPHGRAM' CAPTIVATING
wow such a strong poem it really has deep 'desire' into it
Your choice of words and images is superb and involving. Very good. Thanks
Each time i read this poem my heart melts i love it i realy realy love it my only thought was of you posting it in a newspaper where maybe someone will notice it and convince you to make your own poetry book :) great job luv always (well ur poems lol we never realy met) keep doing what your doing.
It's the longing for satisfaction that heightens the desire within us. Wow. This is beautifully crafted. You deserved to be among the tops. Congratulations!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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1/19/2025 5:03:41 PM # 1.0.0
Well, what can I say my brother.....Your vision is something to be admired and there for desired.........amazing work bro.....it's great to be back and to be reading your fine works again. keep them dizzy bro....10+++ your brother Jon