Charles Bong Hin Joo

Rookie (14th December 1978 / Sarawak, Malaysia)

The First Impression - Poem by Charles Bong Hin Joo

I wonder who is this girl,
Who sit just infront of me,
Really wish to get to know her,
Wondering to become her friend can I be.

She might look demure in the class,
And also quite sleepy sometimes,
But in the class, she's the cutest lass,
Hoping she and me could spend some time.

Looking from behind might not say so much,
But she kept me awake as the class become boring,
I guess she's a good girl such and such,
Hope to get her number so I could ring.

The ring on her hand, I wonder what it mean,
Could it be another bad news to me,
Oh please, wake me up from this dream,
I know she and me will never be.

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  • (8/17/2007 3:54:00 AM)

    Hi, nice poem. Just approach her. Keep on writing. Take care. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 11, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 10, 2011


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