The First Line Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

The First Line

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If the 'good line' in a poem-
was born to its previous line-
where did the 'first line' come from?
The 'first line' in a poem is mine
The 'first line' in my poem is wholly mine
I have bourne it to the 'concept' in my mind.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 01 April 2009

Now this statement is mighty impressive and one I fully agree with. Well stated. GW62

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Naidz Ladia 31 March 2009

first line should be as good as in other lines inorder to make a good work...the first line should be attactive inorder to catch the readers eyes..if we talk of the first line, it is referred to the title, so inorder to be more attractive to viewers, the first line or the title should be peculiar. naizz

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Kesav Easwaran 17 December 2008

that's how generations progress one after the other, in line...well 'conceived' idea...delivered well...10

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