The First Time Poem by Cigeng Zhang

The First Time

Rating: 4.6


The legs, pretty true

The white, lusty

In a rainy afternoon

Bare feet

Dancing

Moving

Spinning

Quick short steps

Then saying

Oh cutie, living!

Tuesday, September 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 September 2014

A humorous poem. I like it. Keep it up and thanks for sharing.

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Cigeng Zhang 12 May 2015

Thank you Chinedu for your sharing.

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Kwai Chee Low 13 October 2014

Beautiful poem, Cigeng, it really captures the essence of the moment. The joy of dancing in the rain, and your words, short and powerful; I can really see her image through your imagery!

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a beautiful sneaky in the inner sense. Beautiful poem Cigeng

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Siddartha Montik 16 March 2018

Yes like Terry Craddock said.. youth Dances and in mysterious ways.. and you captured it in few words and expressing in Multitude! ! Thanks for sharing! ! 10! !

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Terry Craddock 14 January 2017

Youth Dances In Summer Rain Joy youth dances in the joy of afternoon rain in the glorious light of the moon at night in the love of music in a beautiful song Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem 'The First Time' by the poet Cigeng Zhang. Dedicated to the poet Cigeng Zhang.

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Terry Craddock 14 January 2017

I have danced in the joy of afternoon rain, in the glorious light of the moon at night, in the love of music in a beautiful song

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Daniel Brick 17 December 2016

I'm all wet, drenched in rain, but it was worth it to stop for awhile and watch your rain dance and tap into the enthusiasm and sheer joy your dancing conveyed. For those moments you danced and I watched, I felt the rain wash me clean of worries and regrets and your dancing and splashing and spinning taught me a lesson in freedom that I still carry within.

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Cigeng Zhang 22 December 2016

What a poetic comment! Beautiful. Thank you.

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Sareena Asrar 18 October 2016

Really lovely poem. I didn't understand who this poem is about.: /

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