The Great King Passed Away… Comments

A well thought out write with a meaningful message. Simply conveyed but it gave a punch.

An astute observation on life and the cycle of power of the chosen few. To those countries who still practice monarchy, power will only be concentrated within the family circle. Their names will live long whether they contributed something or nothing for the betterment of their country.

A well thought concept the facts of life, great write.

That's the meaning of life, some are lucky, some aren't. When a door is closed, another one is opened, that's the mechanic of life. Very good lines, good theme and idea.

life is ephermal. everything changes, maybe just form... yes. the good lives long after we are gone. 10 Mamta

Kesav you are a desciple of the great king who will be remembered for ever his heavenly body will never rest... very nice piece indeed regards

Very apt and clever words...truth is beauty..so is your poem

.. :) yes true it is... name..work.. remains forever..

Wisely said Kesav.....the name will live on...