Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 284 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

The Great King Passed Away… - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

The great king passed away
Leaving the kingdom in grief
His mortal body laid to rest
Next day the king was hailed
His heir apparent being crowned…

The disciple then asked the sage:
What’s left behind?
Of one who leaves this stage?
His Name; mused the sage:
Will live long through an Age!

3rd May 2010


Comments about The Great King Passed Away… by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (5/17/2010 8:38:00 AM)


    A well thought concept the facts of life, great write. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/16/2010 2:17:00 AM)


    That's the meaning of life, some are lucky, some aren't. When a door is closed, another one is opened, that's the mechanic of life. Very good lines, good theme and idea. (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2010 8:56:00 AM)


    life is ephermal. everything changes, maybe just form...
    yes. the good lives long after we are gone.

    10

    Mamta
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  • (5/9/2010 3:06:00 AM)


    Kesav you are a desciple of the great king who will be remembered for ever
    his heavenly body will never rest... very nice piece indeed
    regards
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  • Indira Renganathan (5/5/2010 3:39:00 AM)


    Very apt and clever words...truth is beauty..so is your poem (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2010 6:31:00 AM)


    .. :) yes true it is...
    name..work.. remains forever..
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  • Sandra Martyres (5/3/2010 2:48:00 PM)


    Wisely said Kesav.....the name will live on... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 3, 2010

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 18, 2010


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