The Great Peace Poem by Savita Tyagi

The Great Peace

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I am not sick-
Just feel like a siphon-
The sap of life drains out
From every pore of my skin.

The soul is said to be the size of a thumb.
What is the size of this Life force?
Without it, the blood is blackened
Yet bodyweight is stupendous!

Desires still burn at my heart
Like a small flame burns
At the bottom of a smoldering log.

Oh! How I wish to muster enough strength
To walk and walk and walk and walk.....
And drop dead somewhere under the stars.
But fear stops me......
In this crazy world
Some vigilante will call the police
And instead of reaching heavens
I will end up in a hospital - a place just
Next to hell!

I love outdoors for what it offers
To my bruised mind and tired soul.
The azure sky and floating clouds,
Chirping of birds and kid's laughter
Bring life back to my weak limbs.
A stray dog keeps my senses alert,
I change the route with eagle's speed!
I am not a dog or cat lover!
Just love people!

I live in plains but to visit occasionally
Snow-covered mountains and tranquil lakes,
Take a short hikes and watch the valley beneath
Is indeed as marvelous as viewing heavens on earth.
So if I fall dead somewhere on a snowy road
That would be just as beautiful as the final abode!

Before I die, may be, just may be.....
I will visit again the Pacific shore.
Take a walk by the beach or drive on highway 101
Who knows; the vast turquoise sea
Of limitless depth and restless waves
May invite me to rest in its cold
And comforting lap.
Transcend me to that auburn horizon
Where sun sets peacefully on life-
On Pacific - the name sake of Great Peace!


1.6.2020.3.30 AM

Thursday, March 26, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 October 2021

A great poem pertaining to life, dream and death! Extremely well composed dear madam...5 stars.

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Valsa George 03 April 2020

I can thoroughly sense your thoughts and feel their full significance at a time when we are forced to stay indoors. This is especially tough for a person who gets carried away by the charms of Nature. Your longing for peaceful rest at a time when life is becoming more and more dreadful is quite rational! An excellent write.10 on 10

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While life is straining to divert the course of the injured towards it with its enchantments death assures deliverance from sufferings and pain. The Pacific may invite to its depths for eternal peace like a mother to her lap for solace. A meaningful poem on life dreams and death top marks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 April 2020

This poem is so beautiful piece of solace desired comfort I went to see the PACIFIC OCEAN COMPOSED A POEM THE FAR PACIFIC WAS treated as a treat ma'am thanks for such a heart warming poem ppme rgds

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2020

A brilliant poem on dream, . Life and death is well executed. It is most beautiful poem based on philosophy which says much about soul, mind and body. The way of presentation is fantastic.

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Savita Tyagi 31 March 2020

Thanks Kumarmani ji for your inspirational comment.

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