If the greatest trick
That the devil ever played
Was to make the world
Believe the lies from his lips
Then the greatest trick
God ever played was to tell
The whole world it was
Made upon day number six.
Interesting, though I do not believe in 'God' or 'Devil'... I believe in what we are, and not for what we could be. =) Nice poem tho, good job!
What an interesting poem to read, Satan convincing the whole world he does not exist and God convincing the whole world He did create the world in 6 days. This does lead to an interesting debate. Well everyone who reads his or bible, has his or her own interpretation of the bible.
GOD is steadfast and doesn't play tricks. The devil though will through deceptions
Yeah john I like that one, short and sweet is often the way to get more impact out of the point you are trying to convey in a poem. nice one.
very good poem, so simple yet brilliant
indeed very very nice i must say as a non god fearing man in truth a trick is a trick but keep in mind that the truth is never far from the faction
wow very pasion from you soul is impressive. nice work well done.. don't give up.. i rate this 10/10
This is a great poem that should be complimented for it's simplicity alone, poetry is not thoughtless chatter, and neither is this...very impressive!
Very interesting. Deep, gives me reason to think. I like it, thank you for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Very good poem. Deep and Short, I like it.